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Dirk Stratton's avatar

I'm loving your sonnets, DA. I vaguely recall that there were a few featured in your books (I particularly recall loving the one that was a footnote), but I realize I likely did not know of your sonnet-love while we were at UC. Did we not take any poetry workshops together? Or was I just too self-absorbed and/or distracted by my troubles to notice? If the latter, my apologies. {I do remember being in Erin's fiction workshop with you and how you proposed the perfect ending for my story, for which I belatedly thank you, if I haven't done so before.}

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Chuck Rybak's avatar

We definitely took a workshop together. I vividly remember your poem (or short story?) about the Duchamp piece. I do kind of have sonnet love. I really love Oulipo work, which is far more avant garde, but to me the constraints are the constraints, regardless of how complex.

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Dirk Stratton's avatar

Yeah the Duchamp story is the one for which you made the suggestion for the ending which remains one of the best workshop suggestions I have ever received. Thanks again. I've been a sonnet freak from the very beginning. The very first workshop I ever took, I vowed to write only sonnets (because I was really annoyed by all the flabby, formless free verse that was all the rage in my youth). I pretty much fulfilled my vow which amazed the prof but kind of annoyed the other workshoppers, who I think, suspected I was giving them the finger every time I submitted a poem for their consideration. And to be fair, they were absolutely correct. I was an obnoxious know-it-all who just oozed disdain for those who didn't meet my ridiculous standards. And the Oulipo! Man, I fell under their spell even before I'd even decided to write poetry. My fellow Unknowner, William Gillespie (Spineless Books publisher) is also a huge Oulipo guy and his book, "Table of Forms" is compendium of Oulipo and Oulipo-adjacent work. Check it out. (spybeambooks.com). But, yeah, constraints rule; probably couldn't write without'em-------

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Jason McBride's avatar

This made me laugh when I needed it most! A clever, fun poem.

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Chuck Rybak's avatar

Thanks Jason! I saw your post from earlier and let's just say I empathize in many ways. So that's another way of saying, I'm glad there was a laugh!

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Stanley Wotring's avatar

I guess you’ve made your case.

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Chuck Rybak's avatar

Hahahahahaha! Love it.

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